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  <title>Comments on 'Walkin''</title>
  <subtitle>It's a hundred miles from here to the next town. Easy enough in a car, but when you're walking with an empty jerry-can that your friend Dogg forgot to fill up last time he borrowed your car, it might as well be a quarter-million miles.

The desert sun's already drained me of sweat, and I'm pretty sure I'm going to die here, somewhere on the side of the road. All I can taste is salt, and I'm so dizzy the only choice I have is to keep walking. If I sit down I'm not getting up again.

Someone told me cacti hold water, but I don't know what kind, or how to get at it. Not that it matters, I haven't seen a cactus yet, just asphalt and baked sand and my own shadow getting longer in front of me.

I think I'm starting to hallucinate, too. At the edge of the flat horizon, right at the vanishing point, there's something tall waving to me. But maybe it's a mirage.

Keep walking.

And now it's right in front of me, and it's tall, with green skin. I know I'm hallucinating now.

It knows my name. &amp;quot;Hello, Charles,&amp;quot; it says.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-01T23:50:49Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Walkin'</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I would definitely like to read on.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-01T23:50:49Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Laine the Grey</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Walkin'</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;ooh, exciting! Are they in Roswell? ;)&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;Poor Charles.&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;I&amp;#8217;d love to hear more of his story!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-01T20:35:30Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>kells</name>
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