Comments on 'Suspicion'After a few seconds, Anthony had realized that he had caused quite a ruckus. People were staring at him in an odd way. Anthony coolly acted as if nothing happened and absentmindedly picked up his Rubix Cube. That scrambled colors were all in uniform. While it was levitating, the Rubix Cube solved itself!
This gave Anthony an idea. One of his rare talents was that he could easily solve a Rubix Cube.
_Maybe it was me..._ Anthony thought.
Anthony's grip on the Rubix Cube tightened, and he walked up to his Boss, who has staring at him incredulously.
"You!" He exclaimed. "What the hell did you-"
"I'm going home," Anthony said. "And my name is Anthony, sir."
Anthony, completely forgetting all of his things at his desk, drove home to prove his suspicion.2008-05-02T20:43:40Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/29119Comment on Suspicion<p>With that last sentence, I was one letter off instead <em>drove</em> I meant <em>prove.</em></p>
<p>I’m fixing it….</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29119?basename=600772008-05-02T20:43:40ZNever Explainhttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_4153Comment on Suspicion<p>I like that he’s starting to put two and two together. Although I agree with Ana Cristina that <em>drove home to drove his suspicion</em> doesn’t quite make sense. Other than that, brilliant. I love the bit about solving the rubix cube while it was airborne.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29119?basename=599942008-05-02T14:26:42Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Suspicion<p>Oh yeah, and you’ve got sequel again. :p</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29119?basename=599442008-05-02T03:29:48Z♠Ana Cristina♥http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Suspicion<p>I personally love rubix cubes, but I’ve never been able to figure out the little buggers. I have no patience for it.<br />Never Explain, you’ve got some ‘splaining to do in that last sentence. It’s not very clear: “Anthony, completely forgetting all of his things at his desk, <em>drove home to drove his suspicion.</em>” <br />I think you might have meant to “assuage” (etc.) his suspicion? Maybe it’s just me, but I didn’t get that line. Other than that, I’m loving how Anthony is starting to defend himself now.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29119?basename=599432008-05-02T03:29:14Z♠Ana Cristina♥http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Suspicion<p>How can you hate rubix cubes? I love them! I’ve figured out how to not only finish it, but do little patterns on them!!!<br />Wait… is that like totally nerdy? Oh well…<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29119?basename=599252008-05-02T01:44:54ZDreamerhttp://ficlets.com/authors/dreamerComment on Suspicion<p>I hate rubix cubes! I end up throwing them across the room! good sequel and made an insight to how strong he is on the insite because without thinking he stood up to he boss.<br />Loa</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29119?basename=598972008-05-01T23:24:56ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrow