Comments on 'The Error of His Ways' As Anthony was waiting for the elevator to arrive in his apartment's lobby, his thoughts turned to Natalie in an attempt to take his mind off the bizarre experience at work (at least, that was the excuse he gave himself). The truth was that he'd been thinking of her all day. He wished she was thinking of him, too. But he knew better. He'd given her his number, but a week had passed and she hadn't called. Anthony hadn't thought to take down her number, too. He'd been so high on confidence that night that he couldn't think straight. Now he realized the error of his ways. And this realization was bitter. _Girls like Natalie just don't fall out of the sky,_ he chided himself. Just then the elevator arrived. As Anthony was about to board it, someone exiting it rammed right into him, knocking the breath clean out of him. &quot;Hey, watch where you're go -&quot; He stopped mid-sentence It was her. It was the cute pizza delivery girl. Natalie. &quot;I've been thinking of you all day,&quot; were the first words out of her mouth. 2008-09-09T17:24:17Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/29162 Comment on The Error of His Ways <p>great work ana, letting her &#8220;fall out of the sky&#8221;</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29162?basename=91950 2008-09-09T17:24:17Z PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA) http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunk Comment on The Error of His Ways <p>&#8220;Girls like Natalie just don’t fall out of the sky, he chided himself.&#8221; <br />Then BAM !!! <br />guess what?<br />She falls right out of the sky&#8230; <br />weird!!!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29162?basename=60717 2008-05-07T00:32:46Z Sailor Emo http://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_love Comment on The Error of His Ways <p>sequelled</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29162?basename=60473 2008-05-05T20:08:29Z Never Explain http://ficlets.com/authors/user_4153 Comment on The Error of His Ways <p>Lucky coincidence, unlucky thing to let slip out. Kind of a nice touch to keep the very real would-be-romantic storyline going in the middle of the fantastic events.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29162?basename=59991 2008-05-02T14:23:24Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477 Comment on The Error of His Ways <p>Oh, I was enjoying this series and then I got caught up in other things. I&#8217;ll have to catch up on it.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29162?basename=59949 2008-05-02T04:14:51Z thebetweenspace http://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspace