Comments on 'Hmmm (What's the Challenge?)'It stared back at me from the confines of its paper cage. Was that a tattoo on its chest?
It smelled divine. It smelled immaculate. It smelled fresh.
It called me out of line. Beckoning with its handsome clothes and sleek body.
Just to spend a few minutes with it; find out what it was thinking. Was that too much to ask?
The others watched me as I stepped toward it, reaching out my hand.
And I grabbed the book from the shelf. 2008-05-02T20:08:33Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/29217Comment on Hmmm (What's the Challenge?)<p>Nicely done. At first I thought it was a male go-go dancer. Yeah, no explaining that. Nice job on the challenge.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29217?basename=600652008-05-02T20:08:33ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477