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  <title>Comments on 'I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]'</title>
  <subtitle>I have been here before.
I know that quiet look, those murmuring hands
that touch upon this and that, never fully answering
the question that has yet to be asked.

You were mine once. I recognize your walk,
the turn of your head just so.
Your eyes draw the hooks of my memory
and make me catch my breath.

You may not remember me now,
but someday soon your heart will recognize mine
and the flood of memories will wash over you
as it does for me now.

Time is a restless lover, impatient for novelty.
He longs to open the door and move into the next room.
But memory is patient. The years are kind to her: 
her beauty stays intact, ageless.

Your beauty is the same for me, removed from time.
The classic lines of your face stir my memory
and the musical quality of your voice
makes my blood sing whenever you say my name.

There's so little we know of living to think we know
all we need to know about life.
But I know this: I was here once 
and my life meant everything because you were in it.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-06T02:32:25Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;That was amazing!  Captivating, entirely.  I was hypnotized by the sultry, silken sound of it.  I related as well.  The way you describe things&amp;#8230;oh, I&amp;#8217;m still in awe.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/29223?basename=60568</id>
    <published>2008-05-06T02:32:25Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Storykeeper of Fae</name>
      <uri>http://ficlets.com/authors/smile</uri>
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    <title type="text">Comment on I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;That was a lovely poem; the descriptions are so alive&amp;#8230;Thank you for entering!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/29223?basename=60175</id>
    <published>2008-05-03T06:22:49Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>NightMaiden</name>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Wow. Wow. This was so incredible.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/29223?basename=60169</id>
    <published>2008-05-03T03:43:10Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>[pens&amp;feathers]</name>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Bittersweet. Love is ageless!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/29223?basename=60094</id>
    <published>2008-05-02T21:59:18Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Mistress Elsha Hawk</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;OK, now I&amp;#8217;m just blushing. Thanks for the compliment. :-)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/29223?basename=60091</id>
    <published>2008-05-02T21:52:22Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>&#9824;Ana Cristina&#9829;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Impressive job answering a basic challenge with a poem.  I would not have thought of that.  Then again, at this moment I&amp;#8217;m not sure I could think of much.  Anyway, lovely&amp;#8230;not that I&amp;#8217;m surprised or anything.  This is you we&amp;#8217;re talking about.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-02T21:51:08Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Wikipedia is a glorious thing &amp;#8211; I went there to get the accents for d&#233;j&#224; vu. It&amp;#8217;s got an interesting article on it, too.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-02T21:44:30Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>&#9824;Ana Cristina&#9829;</name>
      <uri>http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78</uri>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Pardon the misspelling of the phrase. ;)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/29223?basename=60086</id>
    <published>2008-05-02T21:39:15Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>thebetweenspace</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on I have been here before. [D&#233;j&#224; Vu Challenge]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I hesitate to comment because I&amp;#8217;m floored by the imagery and captivated by the tone. What a beautiful poem. (sidebar: how do you get the accents on the &lt;em&gt;deja&lt;/em&gt; in deja vous?)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-02T21:34:10Z</published>
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