Comments on 'Defense'

Comments on 'Defense' I'm not exactly sure what happened, but I was pulled aside and I felt the cold adrenaline form of the gun leave my hand. "Tod...TOD!" Someone was shaking me. "Wuh-huh?" I slurred, not even able to speak. "What happened?" I think Young was shaking me, but it may be Aaron since he has a deeper voice. "...These geeks were robbing a store." I said slowly, the red and blue not as much blinding me anymore. "They had a gun, I recognized them from a scam. If I let them go, they'd get caught and rat us..." I couldn't speak any more, the major adrenaline rush was draining my energy reserves. I stumbled towards a familiar someone. "How ya doin', hero?" Alex smiled with a cigarette hanging in the corner of his mouth. "Wuh happened?" I said, with his personal trail of smoke dizzying me. "You should know." A policeman said, frowning at me. An odd, reflex-like defense mechanism clicked on in my head. _I did nothing wrong, I did nothing wrong, I did nothing wrong._ I was dragged off. 2008-05-16T07:41:42Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/29246 Comment on Defense <p>Cant’ say that I’m surprised.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29246?basename=62685 2008-05-16T07:41:42Z PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA) http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunk Comment on Defense <p>Sequel finally done. Sorry to take so long. Got derailed by other projects and the usual game of what I was thinking vs. what you did, the biggest challenge of a shared series, I guess.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29246?basename=60982 2008-05-08T18:08:59Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477