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  <subtitle>I was sitting there and the knife was sitting on my desk from the other day I brought it up. I walked toward it and picked it up. The doorbell rung and I set the knife down. I went downstairs and opened the door. It was Lauren.
&amp;quot;Hey Ryan, I thought we could... hang out?&amp;quot; she said the last part in a shy kind of voice.
I nodded my head and let her inside. Parents weren't home, so I was kind of safe on that part. They are never home. They don't get home until maybe 10:00.
&amp;quot;So, what have you been up to?&amp;quot; I said and sat down on the couch in the living room.
&amp;quot;Nothing. Just been bored.&amp;quot; she replied and sat down next to me. I looked over at her and it was like a magnet between my eyes and her.
&amp;quot;So... w-what um.... what do you want to do?&amp;quot; I asked.
_Why did I ask that? I do not know._
&amp;quot;I-I don't know.&amp;quot; She replied with a shaky voice and set her head up against my shoulder. I put my arm around her and started to realize...
_She is all I need to be complete_...
We both looked at each other and leaned in closer....</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-29T00:55:56Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Visitor</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;seriously. parents ruin the moment.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-29T00:55:56Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>&#9829;Reel_Nice&#9829;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Visitor</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I love that complete feeling&amp;#8230; lucky bastard, no parents around ;)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-03T04:30:16Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Bartimaeus</name>
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