voices lower...whisper arms welcome....embrace eyes close noses brush lips reach out, part then...touch gently softly tongues meet...wet dance across each other twist roll taste move...in...out probe the kiss is warm slow discovering charting Bodies shift Breath quickens Arms tighten Fingers spread Lips Firm Harden Tongues Push Deeper Reach Want Ask Insist Demand Heads pull apart Breathing...audible...gasping A head bows A forehead touches a nose Pauses A breath is sucked in And lips rise To meet lips again 2008-05-09T22:32:55Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/29275 <p>it has a poetic feel to it. Every second is described with intensity</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29275?basename=61255 2008-05-09T22:32:55Z Apostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27 <p>This is very seductive and intimate. You captured the moment well.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29275?basename=60210 2008-05-03T17:31:59Z ♠Ana Cristina♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78 <p>That&#8217;s okay not to mark mature.</p> <p>But Oh, I love it!!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29275?basename=60208 2008-05-03T17:07:09Z I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!! http://ficlets.com/authors/manic_panic <p>mm very well described kiss scene, grasping every bit of the sensation</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29275?basename=60197 2008-05-03T15:09:31Z Bartimaeus http://ficlets.com/authors/user_7307 <p>Being very new to this forum, I was not sure about the &#8220;mature&#8221; rating. When in doubt, error on the safe side. Please provide feedback to me about that. Thanks</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29275?basename=60185 2008-05-03T13:12:04Z Mrs. Robinson http://ficlets.com/authors/rls0802