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  <title>Comments on 'Addison's Descent'</title>
  <subtitle>Clayton remains in an oblivious slumber by my feet, announcing his indifferent stance on the recent events with voluminous snores -- loud enough to make any lawn mower proud. 

I'm overloaded. My eyes droop like the wax of a candle at the bottom of its wick.

_No!_ I protest to myself. _You must make it back to the barn before you rest. You can do this Addison._
Up the hill I trudge. Past the blank headstone. Through the field of corn and into the Safe Haven barn. I collapse into a pile of old hay. Asleep as I fall.

Falling.

My body hits the soft hay like it's water -- catching my weight with a bob of buoyancy, and then I submerge as all support gives out.

Sinking.

Ground zero of my dream is the farm. Safe Haven barn sways beneath the hypnosis of water like corn stalks in the wind.

I don't notice Clayton lying in a pool of his own death until a sharp and stealthy talon slides over my neck. My head tilts back. A cloud of my own crimson blood flows heavy, floating up, pooling at the surface.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-04T00:32:29Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Addison's Descent</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Very surreal and really cool, too.  Basically everything  THX  said&amp;#8230;this whole ficlet has its own little sense of writing style that makes it distinct, like the other ones you&amp;#8217;ve written.  I like it.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-04T00:32:29Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Stovohobo</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Addison's Descent</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Trippy, freaky and disorienting.  Not sure I know which way is up, but I know it&amp;#8217;s good.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/29298?basename=60239</id>
    <published>2008-05-04T00:21:00Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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