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  <title>Comments on 'The Unexpected'</title>
  <subtitle>I wandered around in the darkness. I noticed that it wasn't completely dark. It was as if the sky were stained with dark berry juice. I could see my body, I could make out spindly trees, but I couldn't see the horizon.

I moved as if through jelly. I had one purpose, to get out. But in this darkness I couldn't tell which way 'out' was. As I neared things they became more distinct, as if I traveled in a heavy purple fog.

I began to feel panic. I began to miss home and family and comfort. A sense of urgency and fear overtook me. I tried to run. I tried to focus more on objects in the distance, looking for an exit. My breathing became labored and my heart pounded. My hearing and vision sharpened. I heard something behind me!

I knew it was close. I knew it was looking for me. It was here the whole time, waiting for me to move. It wants to stop me. I want to scream.

I run and look behind me, run, and look ahead. I can't see it, I expect evil red eyes and large teeth. I stumble and fall! 

I jolt awake.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-08-25T19:12:24Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Unexpected</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;ya even if this isn&amp;#8217;t a dream  I GUESSS  it can count in the challeng&amp;#8230; (unless you dont want it to)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-08-25T19:12:24Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Unexpected</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Ouch. Talk abut a nightmare. She&amp;#8217;s lucky she woke up!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-08-25T03:50:41Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>OrangeOreos</name>
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