Comments on 'Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)'*"Hey Everyone! I have something very important to say so listen!"* She shouts across people talking and waiting. She sees everyone staring at her and gets a little nervous. She clears her throat and thinks, _Here goes nothing_.
"None of you people probably know me but, I can't take any of these rumors that I hear anymore. Some of them are just horrible. Is this how you guys really think of other people, or is it that you are to jealous of each other? The rumor that Alison slept with Jason is totally wrong and it ruined her life because of it. The rumor that Kate smokes crack is totally off because she is a total goody girl. The fact that Joe killed someone is like the stupidest thing I ever heard because he is actually a nice guy that would never hurt a fly. These are just some of them as you know. My question to you is if you hate hearing rumors about yourself so much then why do you do it to other people?"
People begin whispering to each other. _My work here is done._2008-05-15T22:09:10Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/29453Comment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>This is great! Rumors can be so hurtful sometimes. I love how it’s the quiet girl who speaks up…go quiet girl! :-D<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=625812008-05-15T22:09:10Zpaper flowershttp://ficlets.com/authors/paper_flowersComment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>aha! thanks!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=610032008-05-08T19:37:00ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrowComment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>i think she ment Se is supposed to be She.</p>
<p>i love this because it has to be the truest thing, people constantly talk about anything whether its true or not.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=608892008-05-07T22:47:06Zp.lauréhttp://ficlets.com/authors/p_laureComment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>Hey? Hey is spelt wrong? I am confused…<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=607192008-05-07T00:33:09ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrowComment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>Nice job. I agree with jenunique, I pictured a high school cafeteria. (you misspelled the first word)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=606432008-05-06T21:17:12ZMrs. Robinsonhttp://ficlets.com/authors/rls0802Comment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>Very well written. If only someone would be screaming that at the whole world.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=605182008-05-05T22:29:20ZFreedomhttp://ficlets.com/authors/http_ficlets_com_authors_withinthewords_comComment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>For some reason I pictured this in a school/university cafeteria. Just seems like the perfect setting. Nice job.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=605112008-05-05T22:03:07ZJenuniquehttp://ficlets.com/authors/jenuniqueComment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>Wow, nice entry! =) I like that she went through with what she wanted to say even though she got nervous.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=604942008-05-05T21:28:28Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>“Hey everyone!” is definitely a 20th century “Hear ye!” LOL I think they should have been more surprised that she spoke up, because being the quiet one makes it that more dramatic. :)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=604892008-05-05T21:25:44ZMistress Elsha Hawkhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mistress_elsha_hawkComment on Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)<p>It is completely different from the other entries, but I love the originatlity. I love how even though she didn’t know anyone there, she felt that she had done her job. Wonderous entry. Thanks for competeing!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29453?basename=604882008-05-05T21:22:25ZLouise Madisonhttp://ficlets.com/authors/rockin_rose_guitar