Comments on 'A Dance for Cole'Prim as ever, Cole sat in the metal chair, legs crossed daintily and the chair backed away at an angle from the bare table. He sighed his usual melodramatic sigh when Agent Lefleur came in grumbling over a stack of papers.
"So we shall dance again, Agent..." Cole began.
"Nope," Agent Lefleur cut him off, "No dancing analogies." He sat and began to arrange his papers. Cole considered this man, this bulky figure. The man's gray eyes peered out from coarse features topped with an untamed mane of dirty blond hair. This lumbering hulk playing at the cerebral game of detective would have struck Cole as funny. It would have if it were doggedly directed towards him.
"Very well," cooed Cole, "But does that mean no pleasantries altogether?" No response. Cole sighed again and glanced at his watch. He'd been waiting an hour.
With a click the tired tape recorder was started, "Okay, May four..."
A knock came, and the door was flung open, "Agent, it's one of the girls! She's called 911...like, now!"2008-05-29T18:27:00Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/29804Comment on A Dance for Cole<p>Very excellent work. PyroPunk is right, the images are very vivid. It’s like I’m there watching and listening to everything without anyone even knowing I’m there.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29804?basename=661642008-05-29T18:27:00ZHunting Beautyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/missourigirlComment on A Dance for Cole<p>the images are so vivid</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29804?basename=624702008-05-15T14:21:31ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on A Dance for Cole<p>I like the banter between the two characters and the ending keeps you on your toes. And the plot (in the entire series) has a way of keeping you guessing.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29804?basename=610132008-05-08T19:50:47Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on A Dance for Cole<p>Suspenseful.. some highbrow dark humor in this,but over all not like any series you’ve written, i am very impressed. you remain the highlight of my ficlets experience.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/29804?basename=609962008-05-08T19:04:30ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorf