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  <subtitle>The car engine stopped and he walked around and opened my door and took my hand. His palm was warm against mine. I stepped out of the car and could hear waves in the distant. I could smell the ocean breeze. Aaron led me forward he told me to take my shoes off and I did. My toes touched the cool sand as I took my shoes off. He led me closer to the water. &amp;quot;Ok, You can open your eyes now, Bella&amp;quot; He told me. I felt as If I was looking at a painting. Beautiful colors lit up the sky vibrantly, the ocean's beautiful blue water swaying in various directions. &amp;quot;Aaron... It's... beautiful!&amp;quot; I said breathelessly. &amp;quot;I know..&amp;quot; I felt his eyes on me again. I turned to face him. Our faces were only a foot away. He stared at me intently and I felt like I was in a fairytale. He glanced at my lips and slowly got closer to me. I looked down at the sand, thoughts swirling through my mind. What will Annie think if I do this? Will Blake hurt him? Is this really happening? I felt a warm hand gently lift my chin. </subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-10T02:59:18Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Secret Place</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;oh my gosshhh!!!!  I LOVE IT !! especially the last line!!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-10T02:59:18Z</published>
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      <name>Just another writer</name>
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