Here I sit, my story told As he stares at you with his Eyes of Gold I've fought this battle long and hard and I feel as if my heart is barred He ensnares you with with his Golden glare But I can hold you with love and care Please believe me when I say I'm right and that all he does is stare in spite Please decend in my eyes of Blue Because the heart beneath will never hurt you He may try to promise and swear but all he has is that Golden stare If you're light is gone, I'll be lost and his heart is as cold as frost but this war isn't over yet cuz I fight from sunrise to sunset I'll tear out his Eyes of Gold and love you like the days of old I fight for you each day and night hoping in the end it'll be alright He stares at you with his Eyes of Gold But he cannot say what I have told He may be jealous of me and you But he'll never have the love I have for you... 2008-05-10T02:27:52Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/29873 <p>love it. you were always good at writing. this just proves it even more so. =) defending your love from someone unseemingly harmful. so romantic and strong with passion. like i said, i love it.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29873?basename=61326 2008-05-10T02:27:52Z Just another writer http://ficlets.com/authors/just_another_writer <p>Ooh, that was lovely. It&#8217;s certainly a romantic theme, fighting to save the one you love from their own folly.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29873?basename=61314 2008-05-10T01:27:29Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477 <p>Loved the rhymes, the rhythms were good once I read them correctly. Funny. How is it that you and I are always writing about similar love situations? I just posted a poem, so I&#8217;m not going to sequel with it like I usually do.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29873?basename=61114 2008-05-09T02:16:32Z Storykeeper of Fae http://ficlets.com/authors/smile <p>I liked the rhythm of this, it makes it feel as though it was written years and years ago. I&#8217;m not normally one for rhyme schemes, but this works nicely. Great work!<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/29873?basename=61099 2008-05-09T00:45:57Z Ana Cristina http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78