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  <title>Comments on 'Real-ity'</title>
  <subtitle>The knocking on the car window startled Gary from the trance-like state he'd reached while staring at the gun. Looking up, he saw her welcome, hardened face and rolled down the window.

&amp;quot;Thinking about it again, huh?&amp;quot; she asked, her whiskey-laden breath making him nauseous.

&amp;quot;Hey, Felicia.&amp;quot; He managed a weak grin and then, almost as an after-thought to himself, said, &amp;quot;Yeah, again. Maybe one of these days I'll actually do it.&amp;quot;

&amp;quot;Yeah, and maybe you won't.&amp;quot;

Gary shrugged, looked at the gun and then back at her. A smoldering weed hung from her cracked lips, scars pocked the bends of both arms, and her hip-huggers were stretched to their limits. But, she was beautiful. To him, a comfort and a salvation -- if only for a little while.

&amp;quot;Come on.&amp;quot; She winked. &amp;quot;You know what you really want.&amp;quot;

And she was right.

Laying the gun aside, he got out and pecked her on the cheek. &amp;quot;I love you.&amp;quot;

&amp;quot;No, you don't.&amp;quot; She took his arm and led him into her room. &amp;quot;What the hell happened to your face?&amp;quot;

The door closed behind them.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-13T23:53:08Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Real-ity</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I missed the actor part, but great descriptions! She sounds hideous! Someone I would cross the street to avoid making eye contact with!  LOL &lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-13T23:53:08Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Mistress Elsha Hawk</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Real-ity</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Very nice.&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;I am becoming very interested in Gary the down and out actor on the verge of violence looking for a soft spot to lay his head.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-09T23:16:34Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Tony Mannor</name>
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