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  <subtitle>&amp;quot;Well, what are you waiting for?&amp;quot; she said almost robotically as she lay back, propping herself up by her arms behind her.

&amp;quot;No, no...I'm not here for that,&amp;quot; he stammered, looking at her. As he drew closer he could see her fully, blinking behind two large eyes and a peaches and cream complexion and a waterfall of dark hair. She was like a living breathing doll. He stopped breathing for a moment. He didn't know that these girls were so pretty. He had expected a much older woman, bleached hair, red lipstick with a cigarette dangling from her mouth that coughed out raspy words from wrinkled lips.

She gave him a worried glance, and edged back a little.

&amp;quot;You aren't going to kill me are you? They always warn me about this, I mean, this is dangerous country out here in the middle of nowhere desert, you know.&amp;quot; He could see she was inching her hand slowly to the bedside table. He hoped that she didn't have a bowie knife stashed out somewhere.

&amp;quot;No, please,&amp;quot; he began. &amp;quot;Really, I'm not even going to touch you.&amp;quot;</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-09T23:41:26Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Velvet II</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Fabulous descriptions, who is he and why is he there? :)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-09T23:41:26Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Mistress Elsha Hawk</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Velvet II</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Certainly makes one curious.  Nice job continuing to give them both a bit more character.  I love the description of what he was expecting.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-09T18:07:44Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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