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  <subtitle>I ran into the house in a flat panic. Where were Angela and little Nick?

I knew this was to good to last, those bast... &amp;quot;Oh, hi sweetheart,&amp;quot; said Angela as I raced into the kitchen, &amp;quot;where's the fire?&amp;quot;

&amp;quot;Whu, what?&amp;quot; I said &amp;quot;I thought, the front door was open...&amp;quot;.

&amp;quot;Oh, the delivery men must have left it open as they left,&amp;quot; she said brightly. &amp;quot;Here is the package that they left for you.&amp;quot;

She handed me a brown envelope, about 6 inches square. I opened it and extracted a DVD with BioWeps branding.

Without even checking its contents, I could clearly see the message. &amp;quot;Come work for us, we know where you live, and that you have gone to GlobTrak.&amp;quot;

Why oh why did I send them my CV as well? Having one villainous corporation interested in you is bad enough, never mind two.

I walked up the stairs resolutely to go and confirm my suspicions. As I plugged the DVD into the drive and the video clip started, I wondered what fate was now going to throw in my direction, and how was I was going to break the news to Angela?</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-06-23T01:27:32Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on A mysterious package</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Funny, having one evil corporation after you is bad enough, let alone two. I love that he can read between the lines and knows exactly what the package is meant to invoke.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-23T01:27:32Z</published>
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      <name>thebetweenspace</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on A mysterious package</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Haha, John needed to do some thinking!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-05T12:44:21Z</published>
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      <name>PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on A mysterious package</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Oh man, you totally took it in a different direction. Intrigue without the threat of violence to the family. See, this is exactly what makes this little exercise cool.&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;And great bringing BioWeps back; but in the original story, I thought they were introduced as a different department of GlobTrak rather than a Sprokley Sprokets/Cogswell Cogs type rivalry. Good stuff to work with.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-09T22:04:35Z</published>
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      <name>John Perkins</name>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I liked the line about two evil corporations, let alone one.  Nice tension to the whole thing, especially in the first half.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-09T21:00:43Z</published>
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      <name>THX 0477</name>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;&amp;#8220;Having one villainous corporation interested in you is bad enough, never mind two.&amp;#8221;&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;Love that line.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-09T21:00:38Z</published>
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