Comments on 'Woken Up'He did. The cop cleared me, took me home, talked to Greg's mom since she was my guardian while Boston was in college, and I got to sleep off the whole day...
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"Hey, twerp, wake the hell up." I heard a gruff voice and a strong hand shake me shoulder as I lay face-down in my bed.
"No..." I hate waking up, so I added a few adjectives after "no".
I was flipped over on the bed to face a stern-faced Chris.
"Aww, c'mon." I whined. "I didn't even do anything this time!"
"Get up, or I'll kick yer ass outta bed." He said, walking up.
I sighed, and got out of bed in just my pajama bottoms and a knit ski-hat that I wear out of habit so my hair isn't all messed up when I wake up.
"Nice job, ya saved our hides." Chris said as we sat down.
"Yeah, I did." I said, still pissed that I got dragged out of bed.
I got a good slap cross the back of my head by Chris for my comment. "Ya saved our hides, but no more heroics, okay?" He said.
"Sure, can I go back to bed?" I asked.
"Do whatever you want to do." Chris smiled.2008-05-16T07:56:31Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/30037Comment on Woken Up<p>Great. Sounds like Chris has a soft spot.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30037?basename=626882008-05-16T07:56:31ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on Woken Up<p>Sequel finally done, and guess what. I actually like it! Couldn’t resist the little set-up you left (intentionally or not) at the end of this one…just seemed to fit the character. Hope the interminable waits aren’t getting to ya’ too much.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30037?basename=624832008-05-15T14:44:43ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Woken Up<p>I liked the unmentioned swears added after the ‘no’. Not quite sure I get why Chris got him, other than to pester him cause he can. But still an endearing interaction between the two, in a tough guy sort of way, of course.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30037?basename=624762008-05-15T14:36:11ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477