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  <subtitle>I have a picture of my mother that my grandmother doesn't know about. 

I found it in her closet one day while she was taking a nap. I was trying to be stealthy so that my grandmother, who lay sleeping on her bed a few feet from where I stood, wouldn't wake up and see me. I inched open the closet door, wincing when it creaked noisily. My grandmother shifted once in her sleep but then resumed snoring. I exhaled and realized I'd been painfully holding my breath.

It was strange, my sudden compulsion to pry in my grandmother's closet. I normally didn't do such things. I wasn't overtly curious by nature, not even by the fact that I had no mother or father, just an old grandmother with papery skin but a will made of granite. She would certainly beat me if she found me doing this. But I continued anyways, opening the closet door fully and entering the small space.

I found many colorful kimonos wrapped in paper. Unwrapping one kimono that was bright like a marigold, I discovered a photograph hidden in its folds.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-10T18:45:24Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Picture</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Lovely and has a sense of hope and discovery despite an overall sad tone.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-10T18:45:24Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Picture</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;beautiful, as always &#9829;&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-10T17:45:39Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Nouvelle Bardot</name>
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