Comments on 'Marcello's [Realization challenge]'_I sure know how to pick 'em,_ I thought. _Every time I like a girl she has some problem worth duly noting._ As I thought this, she started to yell, whine and complain about the pasta, saying it tastes bland and that it wasn't worth the trip (it didn't matter that it was a date, that I actually liked the food, or that I paid for it) and that she should go home.
_Why did I ask her on this date anyway? She's rude, immature, slightly annoying, blunt, ungraceful, callous, trifling, tall, beautiful, toned, sexy...I see. The outside wrapping was so...tantalizing, so enthralling that I couldn't help myself, opening Pandora's Box, leaving my self respect to keep Hope company. I didn't think that being shallow and uptight would actually be a hinderance, but oh well, I know what I gotta do now._ "Well, it's been fun. See you around." "Where are you going? This date isn't over!" "Sorry; I've just come to the realization that you disgust me. Goodbye."2008-05-15T01:48:34Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/30168Comment on Marcello's [Realization challenge]<p>wow it is real. I am glad you came to that realization then. =)<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30168?basename=624022008-05-15T01:48:34ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrowComment on Marcello's [Realization challenge]<p>Worst part: based off a true story. I thought I was a douchebag at first for doing that, but then I remembered two things: 1) I am J.B. Williams and 2) It is an equal honor to be on a date, not one way. Oh well, her friends will know me as that a—hole. Thanks for enjoying the first part.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30168?basename=620782008-05-13T16:47:01ZJ.B. Williamshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_5182Comment on Marcello's [Realization challenge]<p>What a blunt answer! It made me laugh. This is a really good example of many people out there, unfortunately. Keep up the good work!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30168?basename=620022008-05-13T04:39:23ZNightMaidenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_7538Comment on Marcello's [Realization challenge]<p>You digust me! Lol! That was a good line! I hate some of my friends that complain it is really annoying. Good job and thanks for entering.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30168?basename=618422008-05-12T19:52:28ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrowComment on Marcello's [Realization challenge]<p>I liked this a lot, too. Beauty can only take you so far, and you do a good job of showing that here.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30168?basename=617252008-05-12T04:34:40ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Marcello's [Realization challenge]<p>i think she just came to the realization that her beauty can’t carry her anymore :) Nice story! I loved the stream of thoughts!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30168?basename=616982008-05-12T00:43:21ZMistress Elsha Hawkhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mistress_elsha_hawk