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  <title>Comments on 'Open the Door'</title>
  <subtitle>Please. 

Let me in. Don't close the door. I'm scared that I'm too weak to open it myself again. I don't think I'll be able to this time. I'm too weak. I was stronger last time, I could open it myself. 

But this time, I think I'll need help. Last time wore me down, and I'm not as strong as before.

But we got so far, didn't we? We were so close, but I slipped. Or you slipped. Or we both did, it doesn't matter who. It brought us both down. 

We can get back up. I think we can. But, you have to help me. I can't do it myself.

All it takes is one hand. One hand to get started. To get back to where _we_ started. Just... open the door. 

Let me in, don't leave me standing here, fallen. 

Because, you're just as fallen as I am.

You're just better at hiding it. 

But the hidden is always eventually found. I can save you from the ones looking, but only if you let me in. 

How? Just open the door. </subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-12T23:22:08Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Open the Door</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I really love this&amp;#8230; Especially the second to last paragraph&amp;#8230; or three sentences&amp;#8230; no wait, that qualifies as a paragraph, right? Anyway, great job!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-12T23:22:08Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>More Ways Than One</name>
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