Comments on 'Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You'Paul smiled, a mischievous twinkle in his eyes. "Okay, but it's gonna _cost_ you."
"What do you want this time?"
"I need a five-page paper on _A Separate Peace_. Deal?"
"Deal." They shook hands.
"Remember, we shook on that, so you can't take it back."
"Why would I take it back? I'd do anything to get with Becca."
"It's due tomorrow."
"Ass! I haven't even read _A Separate Peace_."
"Well, you better get started, then."
"Is she still smiling at me?"
"Yeah, and for what reason I'm not sure. I always thought you sent off the gay vibe. Maybe that's what you should do. Tell her you're gay. Chicks love gay guys."
"If that's the best you've got, write your own paper."
"Okay, okay. Just teasing. Looks like you're in luck. Her girlfriend is on the way right now. Get out of here! And remember we're playing cat and mouse here. Let her come to you. And when she does answer her barrage of pointless questions by leading her somewhere _romantic_. And don't drink too much, Romeo. Your last paper was substandard."2008-07-10T03:06:43Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/30295Comment on Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You<p>That last line was great.</p>
<p>Some shady paper-dealings in the past perhaps?</p>
<p>Time to go on to the sequel!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30295?basename=784072008-07-10T03:06:43ZOrangeOreoshttp://ficlets.com/authors/orangeoreosComment on Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You<p>hahaha, <em>“chicks love gay guys.”</em><br />pretty much true. :)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30295?basename=772302008-07-07T16:11:04Zinvisibility_disabilityhttp://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_storiesComment on Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You<p>holy cow frat-boys arguing and betting over a paper, for a girl… wow.. amazing.. Could they be any more misogynist I like the developing characters here.. good work you guys!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30295?basename=719072008-06-19T02:38:08ZApostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27Comment on Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You<p>Haha, I loved the last line.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30295?basename=659162008-05-28T23:16:01ZDreamerhttp://ficlets.com/authors/dreamerComment on Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You<p>So that’s how guys work deals out. lmao</p>
<p>I like this sequel. You did a good job on it. I liked the whole gay ploy. LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30295?basename=657802008-05-28T18:39:16ZHunting Beautyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/missourigirlComment on Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You<p>What a friend. I love the combination romantic advice with making sure the paper doesn’t suck. Typical guy stuff, right down to the gay ploy.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30295?basename=619092008-05-12T23:00:59ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You<p>OK…I’ve thrown my two cents in with a sequel. Fun series.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30295?basename=618682008-05-12T21:24:03ZBrowncoatbenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/browncoatbenComment on Okay, But It's Gonna Cost You<p>Nice series. I like it.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30295?basename=618572008-05-12T20:47:51ZDr. Moussehttp://ficlets.com/authors/gathkalvr