Comments on 'Foreboding'My day, up to the point where I wanted to enter my locked, thumbprint and iris scan secured cubicle and found the door ajar, was filled with a sense of foreboding.
At 06:75 my alarm started blaring some newly discovered starlet's first hit. I hoped it would be her last. I bashed the snooze button and managed to spill last nights dregs of synthohol onto the carpet The HoovaK sprang into action only do die with a whimper two seconds later. "_Verfluchte Maschinenwirtschaft_" I thought, now I'd have to fill in a requisition form in triplicate to get a new one. Sleep was no longer an option. I kicked the HoovaK, chipping my toenail in the process.
The MetroBots were out in full force, pointing their flashsticks at the masses as they filed past. "_Most likely looking for contraband_" my neighbor mumbled. Thank Corp I still had that ticket..."_THE TICKET_" - I had left it at home! Too late now to get it. Acting nonchalant, I filed past and arrived at Corp Inc. just in time to see Ben drink the last of the coffee.2008-05-14T10:23:35Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/30373Comment on Foreboding<p>Amazing the different directions a sequel or prequel can go – love it, great work here & I intend to write a prequel of my own, though I’m not sure it will be as good as this one. Bravo!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30373?basename=622272008-05-14T10:23:35ZYodaOnCrackhttp://ficlets.com/authors/yodaoncrack