Comments on 'The Tunnel at the End of Brazil'

Comments on 'The Tunnel at the End of Brazil' "Duck, sucker!" I tripped over a white rabbit hole and skidded a few feet, skinning my hands, as the myfather/DeNiro lookalike fired a strange looking gun. Glass shards streamed over my head to the paper monster behind me and the DeNiro lookalike burst into the Nick Lowe's song "I Love the Sound of Breaking Glass." Very appropriate since the glass was breaking. Looking back I could see the damage on the paper too. Paper and glass were being shredded and ground into nothing more than dust. As the pieces got smaller so did the tornado until it was nothing more than a small pile of dust and a very dispirited dust devil scampering off to yet another Brazil. "What are you waiting here for?" DeNiro spoke in my father's voice again. Shoving an old fashioned pocket watch, with chain, into my shirt pocket he picked me up by the ankles and dangled me over the rabbit hole. "You got to hurry or you'll be late." I think I screamed when he let me go and I fell into the pitch black tunnel. 2008-01-25T17:42:49Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/3046 Comment on The Tunnel at the End of Brazil <p>Not sure if rabbit hole dream imagery has jumped the shark yet.</p> <p>Still, dreams are dreams are dreams.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/3046?basename=36362 2008-01-25T17:42:49Z White Hat http://ficlets.com/authors/whitehat Comment on The Tunnel at the End of Brazil <p>Nicely done!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/3046?basename=2861 2007-06-13T03:03:43Z YodaOnCrack http://ficlets.com/authors/yodaoncrack Comment on The Tunnel at the End of Brazil <p>I love it. Nice twist on the rabbit hole.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/3046?basename=2767 2007-06-11T22:43:19Z Punkin http://ficlets.com/authors/user_2537