Comments on 'Why Don't You Open Up That Safe?'The best part of being a bank robber is picking out the costumes. At least that's what Britney thought anyway. As the outlaws combed a costume shop in search of great disguises, one of the employees seemed a little too interested in their activity.
"There something I can help you with?" The manager asked forcefully.
"We're fine. Buzz off!" Jared responded.
The manager started to say something else, but then he spotted Jared's gun bulging out of the side of his pants. He quickly stalked off toward the door to his office.
"What about this one?" Britney asked, holding up a Chewbacca costume.
"A little flashy don't you think?" Jared said, distracted. "Something more subtle. Get me a leisure suit and an afro. I'll be right back."
Jared followed the manager through the double-doors and eavesdropped. _Damn, he called 911!_
"That was a stupid thing to do," Jared said, before he pistol-whipped him. "Get on the floor, now, asshole! Should've minded your own business, pal. Now, why don't you open up that safe?"2008-05-14T23:50:26Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/30513Comment on Why Don't You Open Up That Safe?<p>Completely detestable characters, when you considered she just killed someone, and now she’s picking a costume like a kid at Halloween. Chilling stuff. Maybe felt a bit rushed at the end, that darn character limit.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30513?basename=623642008-05-14T23:50:26ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Why Don't You Open Up That Safe?<p>Chewbacca costume< haha i can picture it.<br />You guys are taking this to realms I never dreamt, bravo! pistol whipped, man these two are getting more vilolent per ficlet.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30513?basename=623502008-05-14T22:45:50ZKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Why Don't You Open Up That Safe?<p>A dynamic duo, truly!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30513?basename=623292008-05-14T21:25:17ZMistress Elsha Hawkhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mistress_elsha_hawkComment on Why Don't You Open Up That Safe?<p>the chewbacca refrence had me in stiches! Seriously that was funny. I like how the ending catches your attention. What a twist of events. Exellent edition to the series. It’s a seamless fit.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30513?basename=623172008-05-14T20:45:51ZApostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27