Comments on 'Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye'"I am not a monkey," the female ape bellowed, her massive head shaking with rage, spittle spewing out.
"I'm not sure if I'm supposed to be frightened or nauseous," Stella mocked, taking a judicious step backward. Dr. Munroe coughed around his pipe in surprise at the detective's audacity. His wife did not share his bemusement at the situation.
Valeen, the violent ape and love of the doctor's life, screamed unintelligibly, but Stella leapt forward undaunted and with a practiced and deadly accurate finger poked the big fem-bully in the eye. The ape bellowed and fell to the floor with a mighty crash, shaking Dr. Munroe's desk and his confidence. With more than a little strut in her walk Stella retrieved her .38 from the corner of the floor where it had skidded.
"Silly apes so sensitive about their eyes," she said with a shake of her head and a disappointed tsk-tsk. "Now where were we, doctor?"
"Up a creek," came his weak reply.
Waving her .38 carelessly Stella remarked, "And I've got the paddle, sugar."2008-05-14T13:26:03Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/3053Comment on Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye<p>laughed out loud at that last line. Makes me want to read more…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/3053?basename=622452008-05-14T13:26:03ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye<p>very wity snappy dialogue, fast paced, wonderfully cheeky comedy.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/3053?basename=619912008-05-13T03:35:41ZKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye<p>Awesome sequel (had no idea it was written so long ago). Very interesting…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/3053?basename=616622008-05-11T22:31:16Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye<p>I remember reading this about a year ago and I decided to look it up again. This is a story line I’d like to see you continue. CMTKOM ’s ficlet before / prequel was great too…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/3053?basename=615962008-05-11T14:47:53ZYodaOnCrackhttp://ficlets.com/authors/yodaoncrackComment on Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye<p>Hahaha, I think your comment was funnier than my whole silly ficlet, Alexa!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/3053?basename=61192007-07-31T03:21:47ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye<p>{Alexa pauses, wondering if PETA would be more upset at the good doctor for scientific experiments involving an ape, or at the good doctor for sexually harassing the ape into marriage, or at Stella Starr for injuring a genetically altered animal. Shaking her head, she decides the headache was too much before, and now it’s definitely gone beyond.}</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/3053?basename=60352007-07-30T21:58:59ZAlexa ♥http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018Comment on Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye<p>No, no, no! I am not the one to continue it. Someone else is supposed to pick it up, right? I thought that was the Ficlets game.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/3053?basename=20182007-05-19T16:03:02ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye<p>What happens next? You really gotta continue this one. ~Yoda</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/3053?basename=20052007-05-19T01:45:02ZYodaOnCrackhttp://ficlets.com/authors/yodaoncrackComment on Stella Star and The City of the Super-Apes: In Your Eye<p>Well done! I love the last line!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/3053?basename=20012007-05-19T00:57:46ZCrown Me Tarzan, King of Marshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_605