Comments on 'Viva La Movement!'“Hidey Ho everybody!” A high pitched voice echoed from between my legs. I leapt from the throne in terror and confusion, my pants collecting in a heap at my feet.
“What the hell?” My voice cracked like a thirteen year old boy giving a presentation. Back against the stall door, I peered cautiously into the toilet bowl. “Who said that?”
One of the floaters seemed to be wearing a floppy red hat topped with a white ball of fuzz. Twig-like arms began to sprout from the thing as it swam, _it’s swimming?_, towards the edge of the bowl. As it began it’s ascent to the seat of the porcelain throne, terror overwhelmed me. My breathing became erratic. Sweat oozed out of my pores in steady streams.
“Hello Mr. Bennett.” The vile thing began to speak through a small hole below a piece of yellow corn. “I’m Mr. Hankey, and I’m here to help with The Movement.”2008-05-19T11:58:18Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/30534Comment on Viva La Movement!<p>Oh, so this is the Mr. Hankey sequel someone mentioned. I missed it until now. I thought it was impressive how you maintained the serious tone of the other ficlets while introducing something as silly as the talking poo from South Park.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30534?basename=633332008-05-19T11:58:18ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Viva La Movement!<p>Oh <em>you</em>! Ha – funny, yet disturbing…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30534?basename=627052008-05-16T11:58:24ZYodaOnCrackhttp://ficlets.com/authors/yodaoncrackComment on Viva La Movement!<p>disgusting, but funny in a south park kind of way. I think that before you write anything you should mark it mature just in case. I liked the description of how his voice cracked. I almost threw up at the chunk of corn part.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30534?basename=626382008-05-16T02:46:49ZTad Winslowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/tjdComment on Viva La Movement!<p>You’ll get no argument from me.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30534?basename=624372008-05-15T06:14:08ZJohn Perkinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/johnperkins21Comment on Viva La Movement!<p>That was even worse than the prequel.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30534?basename=624352008-05-15T06:01:42ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on Viva La Movement!<p>Sorry, I couldn’t resist.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30534?basename=623372008-05-14T21:50:00ZJohn Perkinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/johnperkins21