Comments on 'Washed Brilliance, part 1'My name is Sam Leylie, and I have come up with a brilliant plan to rule the world.
I am 11 years old, a certified genius, and, most suprisingly, I'm a girl.
I know, I know. When you think of a kid genius, you usually think of a little boy with a white lab coat on, concocting a strange, bubbling green potion in a labratory. In actuallity, the only boy genius I know that even owns a labratory lives in Utah.
Now you're probably wondering what my brilliant world domination plan is. I would tell you, really I would, but I simply can't. Why, you ask? Because of a washing machine. A washing machine and a pair of blue jeans.
My amazing plan came to me when I was sitting on a swing at my school playground at aproximately 11:43 AM. I was just sitting there when it hit me- BAM! The most brilliant plan ever made by man kind (well, girl kind)! I immidately knew I had to write it down, but I had no paper. Asking my friend for some, she said she didn't have any, but she knew that Jimmy B. did. I ran across the 2008-05-15T21:35:31Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/30589Comment on Washed Brilliance, part 1<p>This is really good. I like it. Keep on going. I really want to hear more! Read my stories!</p>
<p>LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30589?basename=625732008-05-15T21:35:31ZWriter4Life00njhttp://ficlets.com/authors/writer4life00njjComment on Washed Brilliance, part 1<p>Sorry about ending mid-sentence. i ran out of word space & (you were right) i didnt have time to write the sequel. But hopefully I’ll be able to post it soon.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30589?basename=625592008-05-15T20:48:11ZJamie Rosehttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_9228Comment on Washed Brilliance, part 1<p>Genius with a poor memory perhaps. I thought the whole girl genius idea was really cute!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30589?basename=624502008-05-15T13:39:25ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Washed Brilliance, part 1<p>This story seems to kind of ramble on. And ending mid-sentence really knocks points off. I’m interested in the blue jeans and the washing machine, so you’ve got an interesting story going here. It’s just… off? It’s missing a certain flow that I believe comes from possibly being rushed?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/30589?basename=624322008-05-15T05:33:27ZJohn Perkinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/johnperkins21