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  <title>Comments on 'What a pickle'</title>
  <subtitle>He always considered his wife as kind of funny looking. Not in the slightly squint eyed sort of way, but in the not-quite-able-to-put-your-finger-on-it-but-I-find-it-strangely-attractive one.

He stood there looking at her, standing in the kitchen doorway, unable to gauge any intent from the expression on her face. 

&#8220;What?&#8221; she blurted out, biscuit crumbs spraying out in all directions. 

&#8220;What is that supposed to mean&#8230;finally? Was it a delivery you were expecting?&#8221; he asked incredulously.

&#8220;No of course not. Stop being so melodramatic and go and bring it in. It&#8217;s obviously someone&#8217;s idea of a joke. Go and get it.&#8221;

He shook his head in utter disbelief and turned back out of the front door towards the mailbox.

Striding back into the house he waved it towards her &#8220;See, this isn&#8217;t a joke? This is a real&#8230;&#8221;

He stopped mid sentence, the loud bang and flash bringing his tirade to an abrupt halt; groaning as his wife stumbled back through the kitchen door and crashed into the fridge.

&#8220;Shit!&#8221;</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-19T20:41:39Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on What a pickle</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Ah, another sequel off the popular ficlet.  Different take, some nice action, a twist, and still lots of mystery to it.  Worthy addition to the fun.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-19T20:41:39Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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