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  <title>Comments on 'Heaven On Earth'</title>
  <subtitle>_I wasn't thinking when I ignored the stop sign on the intersection of *Elm St.* and *Skyway Ave.* speeding past houses. But then it hit me, quite literally. It was a red Ford Explorer that was coming out of an Gulf gas station. It too was speeding, and hit me on the driver's side. Then all went blank..._

I woke up, a thin line of sweat had formed above my lip. The sheets were tangled in my legs, and the clock on my dresser said *8:04*. Sun poured through the window, giving the room a sort of cozy feel. I could smell bacon in the air.

Downstairs, someone was cooking breakfast, I could hear the sizzling of the fryingpan. &amp;quot;Hey Grandma,&amp;quot; I said, then hesitated. Grandma died two years ago. I thought about the possibility of another nightmare, quickly deciding that it was.

After breakfast, I went outside to walk to school. Was it just me, or did the population of Clifton drop before my eyes. Then I realized that it wasn't a nightmare. I wasn't even sleeping. _This is Heaven_, I told myself.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-21T20:08:30Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Heaven On Earth</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Unexpected ending. Smelling breakfast was an added touch, Heaven in your story, sounds awesome.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-21T20:08:30Z</published>
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      <name>Kermitgorf</name>
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