Comments on 'Advice For the Perfectionist, the Conformist, The Monster-In-Waiting, And Everyone Who Refuses to Man (Or Woman) Up And Take Control of Their Lives'Completely broken
No will to exist
Haunted by a penitentiary
Of ill-conceived notions
The quest for perfection
Tainted by imperfections
Leaves you empty
Drown your sorrows
Wear your masks
Pretend you're okay
Escape from reality
It's what everyone else does
Assert yourself
Stop giving in
Do _not_ conform
Follow your dreams
Stop allowing _them_ to dictate
_Your_ life
Or you will wake up
Wondering who or
Even _what_ you are
Weighed down by the consequences
Of all those decisions
You were too weak _not_ to make
*Communication terminated by the Authority. The C.E.O. of the Powers-That-Be. A not-so-distant cousin of Big-Brother. An enemy of all that is creative.*2008-05-22T09:28:27Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/31244Comment on Advice For the Perfectionist, the Conformist, The Monster-In-Waiting, And Everyone Who Refuses to Man (Or Woman) Up And Take Control of Their Lives<p>Kermitgorf is correct, this should be set to music<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31244?basename=640562008-05-22T09:28:27ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on Advice For the Perfectionist, the Conformist, The Monster-In-Waiting, And Everyone Who Refuses to Man (Or Woman) Up And Take Control of Their Lives<p>poetic/should be a alternative rock song.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31244?basename=640122008-05-22T00:16:27ZKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Advice For the Perfectionist, the Conformist, The Monster-In-Waiting, And Everyone Who Refuses to Man (Or Woman) Up And Take Control of Their Lives<p>This reminds me so much of <em>1984.</em> I don’t think I’ve read your poetry before. It’s very beautiful.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31244?basename=639792008-05-21T23:12:04Z♠Ana Cristina♥http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Advice For the Perfectionist, the Conformist, The Monster-In-Waiting, And Everyone Who Refuses to Man (Or Woman) Up And Take Control of Their Lives<p>good job on the thoroughly strident, ‘this is how it is’ tone.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31244?basename=638722008-05-21T18:31:12ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Advice For the Perfectionist, the Conformist, The Monster-In-Waiting, And Everyone Who Refuses to Man (Or Woman) Up And Take Control of Their Lives<p>Very Tony Robbins-ish, but I like it. Down with ‘The Man’ for not letting you finish!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31244?basename=638612008-05-21T17:42:46ZKrulltarhttp://ficlets.com/authors/krulltarComment on Advice For the Perfectionist, the Conformist, The Monster-In-Waiting, And Everyone Who Refuses to Man (Or Woman) Up And Take Control of Their Lives<p>Brilliant. I’d say perfect, but then you’d get on to me. So briliant.</p>
<p>Love the last part.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31244?basename=638442008-05-21T16:16:48ZMask By The Moonhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mbtm