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  <title>Comments on 'Homeward Tides'</title>
  <subtitle>We know the ship 
We seek the shore
We know the turning seas 
We smell the fires 
Of Cooky's cooking 
Where the gally be. 

We check the sails 
We weigh the rudder 
We guide her Westward Bound, 
She tumbles swell to swell 
With creaking timber sound. 

Homeward-bound 
To homeland hearths
We steer our sailing ship. 
To wife or maiden we look to-fore 
Their waiting kissing lip. 

Hi-dee Ho-there 
Mr. Captain 
How goes our swelling tides. 
We've sailed for twice a fortnight 
With ballasts side to side. 

To home we sail 
For inn and ale 
By morrow we will land. 
With winded haste,
By Angel's grace
And god's great guiding hand. 

Land Be Ho' 
By eyeglass show 
Land bearing 10 sails strong,
Serve rum around, we've made aground
With sailor shanty song.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-05-23T13:01:48Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Homeward Tides</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Thanks, Elsha.&lt;br /&gt;This is actually my second crack at this one.  I wrote a version of this a while back.. but there was something wrong with it &amp;#8211; its rhythm was all wrong.&lt;br /&gt;I think i managed to fix what i didn&amp;#8217;t like about it.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-23T13:01:48Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>ALRO613 &#9834; LoA &#9835;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Homeward Tides</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Nice to see something different from you! I like it! I think of pirates, yet there is nothing really pirate-y (piratical) about this.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-22T21:15:34Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Mistress Elsha Hawk</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Homeward Tides</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Style inspired, by Emily Dickinson&amp;#8217;s Poem:&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;I never saw a moor, &lt;br /&gt;I never saw the sea, &lt;br /&gt;Yet know I how the Heather looks, &lt;br /&gt;And what a billow be.&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;I never spoke with god, &lt;br /&gt;Nor visited in heaven, &lt;br /&gt;Yet certain I am of the spot, &lt;br /&gt;As if the checks were given.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-05-22T19:17:01Z</published>
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      <name>ALRO613 &#9834; LoA &#9835;</name>
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