Comments on 'Famous Last Words (Out-of-Order Challenge)'When James fired his weapon in the air, two of the irate New Orleans Zephyr fans tackled him, trying unsuccessfully to pry the gun from his hands. As the three of them rolled around on the concrete, security arrived a few beats too late to restore order.
The bag of money flew into the air, showering everyone with cash. The gun fired, lodging a bullet into the the Coca-Cola tap, spraying highly pressurized carbonated soda all over the place. Reasonably well-mannered people began wrestling for all the _Franklins, Grants, Jacksons, Hamiltons, Lincolns, Jeffersons and Washingtons_ at their feet.
What happened next was a mystery to everyone. The author of the chaos, somehow in the midst of the melee, managed to slip away undetected with the gun. Beaten down and bruised, he made his way upstairs to pay his former employer a little visit.
The door was closed. _Knock. Knock. Knock._
"Come in," Mr. Banks said.
"Famous last words," James said, moments before unloading the rest of the clip on his former employer.2008-05-27T16:41:08Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/31677Comment on Famous Last Words (Out-of-Order Challenge)<p>Man, you guys take baseball waaaay too seriously. ;-)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31677?basename=654632008-05-27T16:41:08ZTrannhttp://ficlets.com/authors/trannComment on Famous Last Words (Out-of-Order Challenge)<p>This was an awesome story, made even better with the sequence of events. Devastating in some parts, funny mostly throughout, overall one of your better stories. Well done!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31677?basename=653462008-05-26T23:25:04ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Famous Last Words (Out-of-Order Challenge)<p>Ouch, brutal ending, though it wound up kind of quick. Still, a fun scenario.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31677?basename=649262008-05-25T11:26:53ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Famous Last Words (Out-of-Order Challenge)<p>whoa! that was amazing, and it all makes perfect sense!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31677?basename=648092008-05-25T00:24:28ZNissakithttp://ficlets.com/authors/nerissaComment on Famous Last Words (Out-of-Order Challenge)<p>O wow. NIce tension!!!!!!!!! And I get it!!! YAAAAY !!! GOLD STAR !!! sorry… X)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/31677?basename=648032008-05-25T00:18:39ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_love