Comments on 'Lay Me Down In Sheets Of Linen'Sassy tucked Becca into bed moments after calming her down. The waves of tears ceased, but she hadn't said a word in quite some time.
"When you wake up, we'll hit up Duke's Road House to cheer you up. A few Vodka Sours and you'll be just like new."
Becca didn't even acknowledge her, preferring to bury her head in a pile of pillows. Sassy closed the door and Becca melted into her bed, the linens softer than clouds; asleep.
A muffled buzz woke her. It was coming from her purse. Becca feared the worst. _Jeez, I hope Sassy didn't try to cheer me up with a special gift._
She opened her purse and found her pink Razr, a note attached:
_Becca,_
_You're currently trying to talk Old Bess into a body shot, so I figured it'd be a good time to give your phone back. You're acting a bit odd tonight, but all that said, I think I'm falling in love with you. By the way, if you're reading this, you really should answer the phone; it's probably me._
_love,_
_Jameson_
Becca answered, wondering if it _really was him._2008-06-04T13:55:31Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/32978Comment on Lay Me Down In Sheets Of Linen<p>That was great, with a bit of a ribauld comment slipped in there…very subtle. I liked the whole note thing, perfect bit of how he was feeling at that moment, juxtaposed with how things actually turned out.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/32978?basename=679022008-06-04T13:55:31ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Lay Me Down In Sheets Of Linen<p>aww.. how cute is that! its almost like you could put this in a movie!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/32978?basename=678612008-06-04T07:59:12ZApostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27Comment on Lay Me Down In Sheets Of Linen<p><strong>Love it, love it, love it!</strong></p>http://ficlets.com/stories/32978?basename=677242008-06-03T21:47:46ZHunting Beautyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/missourigirlComment on Lay Me Down In Sheets Of Linen<p>Ack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am <em>loving</em> this. It isn’t what I expected at all, you promising writer, you.<br />By the by, I think you might want Sassy to recommend them going to another bar, because Old Bess had never seen Becca before. I am itching to write a sequel, so keep your eyes peeled.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/32978?basename=677202008-06-03T21:43:47Z♠Ana Cristina♥http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Lay Me Down In Sheets Of Linen<p>I love how this is written!! Your a very promising writer! Please continue!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/32978?basename=677112008-06-03T21:18:57ZArtist_Girlhttp://ficlets.com/authors/artist_girl