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  <title>Comments on 'All where'</title>
  <subtitle>I must be remembering it all wrong. 

We were on a vanishing road, and even inside the car there was was more sky than car. My wife was sunburned and kept talking about avocadoes and paint.

At once a man stepped into the road and then men were everywhere. He was almost a freight box on one end, with customs markings painted on his side in stencil.

But then this has to be the same day. Because that is when my wife said, &#8220;Why don&#8217;t they call it all where? It's the same thing. You know: everywhere, every single where, each and every last where. All where.&#8221;

This is when a gang came up behind the man and attacked him: the freight box, still in the road. Two of them held him while another stripped him naked. Then they were all around, like wasps, beating him. I could see the cut above his eye from there.

But that was Arizona, and my wife and I fought about this in upstate New York, fought because I didn&#8217;t do anything, not even from the car. I didn&#8217;t say a word. Yes, I must be remembering it wrong.</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-11-01T19:25:29Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on All where</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I&amp;#8217;m not sure whether I like this or not.&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;I like the idea, and the surreality of it, but at the same time it&amp;#8217;s missing something to me.&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;Would like to see something come from it though, although I know I couldn&amp;#8217;t do it justice.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-11-01T19:25:29Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>SupRspi</name>
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