Comments on 'Alex in Wonderland: Part 12'Jessica's mind reeled for a split second. "Thank you Officer Hampton for tracking down _Alex_ for me," she smiled sweetly. _She had just read Hampton's obituary two weeks ago, surprised he hadn't croaked years ago from a stroke._
"I should have known _you_ were involved somehow," Hampton scowled down at her. Amanda interrupted, "I tried explaining how your _cousin_ is, _like_, out on a day pass, and how he wanders away."
Jessica quickly dropped her arm from Alex, she wasn't sure what _role_ she was trying to take on, but the closeness was more than that of cousins. "Oh, yeah. He is supposed to like.. Well, thanks again. We'll just go," the four of them turned.
"Well, now _wait_ just a minute," Hampton said gruffly. "Who's going to take care of this _matter_ of the stolen magazine?" All eyes fell on Alex.
As they were briskly walking away, Amanda laughed, "I can't believe you wrote a _check._" Becky managed a grin, "And we'll be fine until they learn that Rebecca Garrity is 12 years old."2008-06-05T23:15:34Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33102Comment on Alex in Wonderland: Part 12<p>@JLaughter – first <em>“Mall-Pig”</em> ROTFL! And Yeah, she’d read his obituary 2 weeks before jumping back to 1984. It looks like the girls have jumped back to a Mall that was their haunt back then.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33102?basename=683452008-06-05T23:15:34ZKevMullinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/kevmullinsComment on Alex in Wonderland: Part 12<p>Yeah, I’m a little confused, personally. Especially by the “obituary” line. Did she read his obituary 2 weeks ago, 24 years in the future, maybe? And this is someone she remembers being a mall-pig?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33102?basename=683382008-06-05T23:05:02ZJLaughterhttp://ficlets.com/authors/jlaughterComment on Alex in Wonderland: Part 12<p>Hmm, how does “officer” Hampton know Jessica? Odd little twist here. Interested to see where it goes.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33102?basename=680052008-06-04T21:06:44ZJohn Perkinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/johnperkins21Comment on Alex in Wonderland: Part 12<p>Nice work, looks like we both split off of 11 at the same time again… you type faster than me :)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33102?basename=679832008-06-04T19:28:30ZKevMullinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/kevmullins