Comments on 'HIS Pain a Song Forever'"Now Joey..." It purred in words like silk, "Do we have to cover this again?"
"S-s-shit..."
Two huge black hands with obsidian claws grabbed him by the wrists, as Mathusta lifted his body high into the air. "How many times now... 20, 30?"
"Fuck you!" Jo's wounds glowed yellow from within, then healed. The pain, unbearable, he could not the repress the cry. _He'll enjoy that._
"I'm so crushed... besides we have a deal. You die only when it pleases me. Tonight, however, you have a job, you know the kind I like."
He'd pay for this, pay dearly... _he knew it_. But not tonight, tonight It had a need.
"Make him young, strong, tall, muscular and beautiful. Now be a good piece of ass and go fetch my diner... I'm starving!" It threw Jo into the door. Hard.
His shoulder shattered on impact, arm twisting back. _Don't cry, this is nothing._
"Now see what you made me do?" It waved a hand healing Jo's wounds again. "Now GO before you anger me."
"Yes Master," Jo said as he opened the door.2008-06-08T20:23:48Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33136Comment on HIS Pain a Song Forever<p>Very cool second installment.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33136?basename=691012008-06-08T20:23:48ZRidcully Calverthttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_joonComment on HIS Pain a Song Forever<p>Minor correction (I think), should diner be dinner?</p>
<p>Good series, seems like ages since i read anything dark on this site.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33136?basename=682622008-06-05T18:53:23ZRussell Ruffinohttp://ficlets.com/authors/ruffinoComment on HIS Pain a Song Forever<p>very dark</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33136?basename=681492008-06-05T06:20:06ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on HIS Pain a Song Forever<p>Thanks kaellinn! The next piece is gonna be rough on people.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33136?basename=680742008-06-05T00:56:45ZKevMullinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/kevmullinsComment on HIS Pain a Song Forever<p>Freaky, but gripping. I think your use of imagery has improved.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33136?basename=680602008-06-05T00:05:20Zkaellinn18http://ficlets.com/authors/kaellinn18Comment on HIS Pain a Song Forever<p>This is an interesting, darker, parallel to <em>Reaper</em>. I like it so far.<br />“Its purred in words like silk,” doesn’t quite read properly though.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33136?basename=680592008-06-04T23:57:16ZJohn Perkinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/johnperkins21