Comments on 'The New And Improved Model J'The _old_ Jameson would have melted when Becca smiled at him like that. The new and improved _Model J_, however, ignored her and signaled the bartender instead. Becca would not be outdone, however. "So, is Paul _ever_ gonna get here?" Becca asked. "I'm starting to think you're up to something."
"Funny story," Jameson said. "I raced him here proving once and for all that the Vespa is _mightier_ than the Ram."
"You beat him here?" Becca asked, absolutely amazed.
"The _best_ man always wins," Jameson replied.
The bartender finally came over to take their order. "Welcome to Chili's. Can I get you some drinks or an appetizer? How about a margarita?"
Becca started to order, but Jameson cut her off, "We'll have a round of Presidente Margaritas," he said. "And miss, _shaken,_ not stirred."
When the bartender returned with their drinks and shook the margarita shakers, the girls laughed, finally getting his joke.
They were practically eating out of his hand by the time Paul arrived, but Becca _still_ had a plan.2008-06-07T20:08:56Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33173Comment on The New And Improved Model J<p>I took some advice from THX , Scott, and edited the sequel. It also helps pave the way for our idea. ;-)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33173?basename=688362008-06-07T20:08:56Z♠Ana Cristina♥http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on The New And Improved Model J<p>Crap, sorry to throw off the timeline, tbs. That’s sweet of you to fix it. I’m writing a sequel right now!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33173?basename=684252008-06-06T04:33:31Z♠Ana Cristina♥http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on The New And Improved Model J<p>And I also inserted the bartender in place of the waitress in this one. :)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33173?basename=682102008-06-05T15:28:30Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on The New And Improved Model J<p>Krulltar, that’s a good point so for continuity’s sake I went back to the <em>Tortoise and the Hare</em> and changed placed them at the bar rather than at a table.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33173?basename=682092008-06-05T15:25:45Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on The New And Improved Model J<p>Great series, only one complaint: The pre-prequel <em>The Tortoise and the Hare</em> had Paul already talking with them at the table. Ana’s <em>The Game</em> slide back in the timeline a bit by having them sit at the bar as Jameson swaggered in. Not really noticeable, because of the great dialog going on.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33173?basename=681992008-06-05T14:30:12ZKrulltarhttp://ficlets.com/authors/krulltarComment on The New And Improved Model J<p>Very silly and cheesy, but in a fun way though.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33173?basename=681642008-06-05T11:51:04ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on The New And Improved Model J<p>Yes im dying to know what her plan is.. is she going to lead jameson on more?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33173?basename=681472008-06-05T06:07:46ZApostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27Comment on The New And Improved Model J<p>Yes im dying to know what her plan is.. is she going to lead jameson on more?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33173?basename=681462008-06-05T06:07:44ZApostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27Comment on The New And Improved Model J<p>Jameson is turning into quite the character. I love how he’s suddenly so cool and how Becca is trying not to be <em>outdone</em>. Great job on this sequel. Can’t wait to see it’s sequel.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33173?basename=681342008-06-05T05:10:25ZHunting Beautyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/missourigirl