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  <title>Comments on 'Despair That Will Never Repair'</title>
  <subtitle>I pranced home to see what was amiss
And realized there was something wrong with this
A hatchet in the lawn, A knife by the door
I don't know why I came home anymore.
The door slowly opens
I take a step in
Then hear a faint cry
When I notice that this is just where it will begin.
In the kitchen, my mom lays on the floor,
Knife through her chest,
A man stands vertically upright before my eyes, looking
Possibly possessed.
As he tries to distract me while I push 9-1-1
I notice that in his right hand, he carries a gun.
Relieved as the police pick up, I look over to make
Sure that the demon didn't get away, I notice he was
Dragging my mom out the front door in a garbage bag
And suddenly notice that he is wearing a name tag..
This villian is no villian at all...
It is her atrocious ex if I can recall</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-06-06T12:17:16Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Despair That Will Never Repair</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;omg what a chilling tale. Having to come home to find mom dead on floor.. Horrific! Very well illustrated. One could picture this story in thier mind.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-06T12:17:16Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Apostrophe </name>
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