Comments on 'The Room Awaits...'"Room 34? What's room 34? Who's waiting for me? Tell me!" Emily half-screamed at the orb, which was now, for some reason, stubbornly blank. She slid down beside her nightstand, still in denial. "There's no way a room can give me a coma. Nothing is going to happen." Eventually, she slept.
The next morning, Emily woke to the familiar sound of her clock, signaling 8:00 AM with bright, chiming bells. _"Not so bad,"_ she thought. She slid her slippers on, laughing a little at the toes. Her friend Dana had made tiny frogs and sewed them onto the ends just before the end of middle school, about three years ago. Emily had since outgrown the slippers, but not the frogs. They'd moved slippers every time she got a new pair.
It was going to be a good day.
Then, the phone rang.
"Hey, this is Emily!"
"Emily, thank heavens it's you. This is Dana's mother. There's been a horrible accident and Dana wants to see you. She doesn't have long left. We're in the St. Mary's burn unit, room 34. Come quickly."2008-06-13T08:35:56Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33306Comment on The Room Awaits...<p>oh my goodness… that is…<br />wow.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=704782008-06-13T08:35:56Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on The Room Awaits...<p> DONT GO DONT GO DONT GO !!!!!!!!!!<br /> OMG !!!!!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=701262008-06-12T02:20:22ZLovingYourHeartbreak♥http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxoComment on The Room Awaits...<p>stovohobo, you quoted captain jack sparrow and i love you for it!!!!!!<br /><em>great</em> sequel. i wonder… will she go???</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=699722008-06-11T16:48:33Zinvisibility_disabilityhttp://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_storiesComment on The Room Awaits...<p>Wow, I wonder what happened to her friend!!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=697932008-06-11T00:25:23ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on The Room Awaits...<p>Lol… well lemme think about it…<br />um, NO!!! jk<br />what <em>will</em> happen???</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=692052008-06-09T02:03:52ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_loveComment on The Room Awaits...<p>darn it! Now she is going to have to go!!!=]=]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=690992008-06-08T20:19:03ZNissakithttp://ficlets.com/authors/nerissaComment on The Room Awaits...<p>Oh, bugger.<br />=)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=690572008-06-08T17:39:55ZStovohobohttp://ficlets.com/authors/stovohoboComment on The Room Awaits...<p>oh lord.. now what??<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=687692008-06-07T16:53:57Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on The Room Awaits...<p>We still don’t know what gives her the coma. It could be that the room starts a chain of events.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=687112008-06-07T07:20:34ZTears of Phoenixhttp://ficlets.com/authors/wingsofthephoenixComment on The Room Awaits...<p>Oh my goodness. Certainly a valid and difficult to resist way to get her to a room 34.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=686582008-06-07T00:43:43ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on The Room Awaits...<p> OMG . Will she go? Cause she knows she’s gonna get a coma now.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=686192008-06-06T22:12:22ZDr. Moussehttp://ficlets.com/authors/gathkalvrComment on The Room Awaits...<p>Brilliant way to add to the character while moving the story along as thrillingly as the others.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=685382008-06-06T18:24:54ZRussell Ruffinohttp://ficlets.com/authors/ruffinoComment on The Room Awaits...<p>Th image of the little frogs is just too beautiful. Great continuation.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=684802008-06-06T13:27:34ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on The Room Awaits...<p>A sequel there is, waiting for someone to read it… someone like Zombie Karl Marx.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=684792008-06-06T13:24:50ZEckhousehttp://ficlets.com/authors/eckhouseComment on The Room Awaits...<p>Indeed, I really like the direction. Hint hint taken. : )</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=684592008-06-06T11:40:00ZEckhousehttp://ficlets.com/authors/eckhouseComment on The Room Awaits...<p>Wow, way to ratchet up the suspense just when you thought it couldn’t get any more thrilling. I can’t wait to see what happens next (hint, hint, Monsieur Eckhouse). Great sequel, Tears!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33306?basename=684282008-06-06T04:58:32Z♠Ana Cristina♥http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78