Comments on 'Room 34'As the bus reached the hospital, Emily heard clicking from Wonderball in the backpack resting next to her. She pulled open the zipper -
Trust... me.
Emily signed in at the nurse's desk and proceeded down the hall. Room 32, room 33 - and there it was. Her stomach did one last back flip before she nervously poked her head in the door.
Dana was lying on the bed heavily wrapped in bandages, while her mother sniffled in a chair next to her. Upon seeing Emily, Mrs. Poole jumped up and hugged her tightly.
"Mrs. Poole, I'm so sorry! What happened?"
Mrs. Poole was pale, and shaking. "It was such a freak accident. Dana bought one of those new fortune-telling bowling ball things, and she tried to open it up to see what was inside. The liquid was pressurized, or... oh, god. I don't know what's in those things, Emily, but my baby has burns on sixty percent of her body!"
As her voice trailed off, Emily felt the blood drain from her face. From inside her backpack, she both heard and felt a lot of clicking.2008-06-18T16:42:29Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33362Comment on Room 34<p>Wow… that was awesome!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=716662008-06-18T16:42:29ZAccident Prone Krishttp://ficlets.com/authors/apkrisComment on Room 34<p>Oh. My. God. <br />crap she’s in trouble<br />evil wonderballs!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=704812008-06-13T08:41:57Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on Room 34<p> OMG . I don’t want a wonderball anymore. crappp. scary. oh snap. intense. can’t breathe. im freaked.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=701312008-06-12T02:28:38ZLovingYourHeartbreak♥http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxoComment on Room 34<p>completely agree with uselessness.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=699792008-06-11T16:55:22Zinvisibility_disabilityhttp://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_storiesComment on Room 34<p>I lied in my last comment. I don’t want a cool thing that can tell the future.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=697982008-06-11T01:00:36ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on Room 34<p>wow… DIE VETCH DIE !!! (SORRY!!!! I just have the word Vetch in my system…)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=692072008-06-09T02:09:22ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_loveComment on Room 34<p>Interesting development. Agreeing with the sinister description.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=692032008-06-09T01:24:56Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Room 34<p>Like Dr. Mousse, I have no idea what to say to that! It was amazing!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=691082008-06-08T20:31:04ZNissakithttp://ficlets.com/authors/nerissaComment on Room 34<p>Uselessness’s comment just summed up my whole feeling for this series. Perfect.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=690592008-06-08T17:43:06ZStovohobohttp://ficlets.com/authors/stovohoboComment on Room 34<p>ew.. omg.. that like.. SUCKS .<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=687762008-06-07T17:01:16Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on Room 34<p>One word: <strong>freaky</strong></p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=687472008-06-07T13:35:24ZHunting Beautyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/missourigirlComment on Room 34<p>does she read it?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=686802008-06-07T01:36:31Zi live NYLSChttp://ficlets.com/authors/josieComment on Room 34<p>Did not see that coming. But I suppose that would make it ‘not an accident’, perhaps.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=686612008-06-07T00:47:13ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Room 34<p>Wow. Dang, I don’t know what to say.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=686212008-06-06T22:14:51ZDr. Moussehttp://ficlets.com/authors/gathkalvrComment on Room 34<p>Oh, that’s just <em>sinister.</em><br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33362?basename=685902008-06-06T20:20:46Zuselessnesshttp://ficlets.com/authors/uselessness