She's so fragile And easily broken. She uses her ego To stay out of the open. She shields her heart Behind her pride But now the hole in her heart Is opening wide. Its falling apart And breaking down But you can barely see the pain Through her slight frown. She's so used to hiding She doesn't know we can see That everything she did Is making her what she is going to be. She's confused And doesn't know where to turn Her heart once was on fire for a boy But now he left her with just a burn. The want to want him Is just too much I think she'd be happy Just to have his touch Now she has you And she is falling faster everyday I think that she loves That you don't want to go away. So now she is letting him go Way too slowly it seems But I think you should know That girl is me. 2008-06-30T21:36:22Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/33411 <p>This is such a great poem. I can relate soooo much!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33411?basename=75051 2008-06-30T21:36:22Z Writer4Life00nj http://ficlets.com/authors/writer4life00njj <p>sarah&#38;six feet under the stars- thanks :] hahah i really appreciate your comments.<br />mary- yeah kind of.. I HAVE NOW MADE IT OFFICIAL THAT I HAVE LET GO ! hahahahah</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33411?basename=69144 2008-06-08T22:45:36Z LovingYourHeartbreak♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxo <p>sarah&#38;six feet under the stars- thanks :] hahah i really appreciate your comments.<br />mary- yeah kind of.. I HAVE NOW MADE IT OFFICIAL THAT I HAVE LET GO ! hahahahah</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33411?basename=69143 2008-06-08T22:45:34Z LovingYourHeartbreak♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxo <p>sarah&#38;six feet under the stars- thanks :] hahah i really appreciate your comments.<br />mary- yeah kind of.. I HAVE NOW MADE IT OFFICIAL THAT I HAVE LET GO ! hahahahah</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33411?basename=69141 2008-06-08T22:45:03Z LovingYourHeartbreak♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxo <p>IT&#8217;S GORGEOUS haha i cn relate <br />(bff and kangagoat???)</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33411?basename=68870 2008-06-07T23:19:20Z snakepandafox<3 http://ficlets.com/authors/maryfairy444 <p>ya, i agree. its not as cheesy as the usual rhymey poem. it sounds sort of like a song to me. its really beautiful.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33411?basename=68699 2008-06-07T03:01:27Z Six Feet Under The Stars http://ficlets.com/authors/user_4266 <p>Beautiful poem to match a beautiful picture. Very well written and expressive. I love your choice of words. it rhymes without being over done and cheezy. I hope this gets featured!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33411?basename=68698 2008-06-07T02:50:59Z Apostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27