Comments on 'Greenlee and the Gun'His face turned to rage and he slapped her hard. "Don't you ever talk to me like that," he said. "You're all alone up here, bitch! I'm in charge! You understand me?!"
"Asshole!" Kate screamed, beginning to cry. "How dare you!"
Jerry Traxler looked back from the cockpit. "Everything alright back there? What's with all the yelling?"
"Yeah, Trax. We're fine," Steve said. "I'll be back in a minute."
"Land this plane now! I want out of here or I'm pressing assault charges," Kate said.
Confused and drunk, Susan reached into her purse, pulled out her gun, and pointed it at Steven Herbert Greenlee. “Get on the ground!" She kicked him hard in the stomach, and said, “I mean it, you dirty bastard! Get on your knees now or you’ll die!”
He dropped to his knees and fumbled with his now cockeyed cowboy hat. “Who in the name of God do you think you are?” he asked. "You'll go to jail for this!"
"Susan!" Kate yelled. "What the hell are you doing?!"
"I might as well kill him if I'm going to jail. It'll be worth it!"2008-07-08T16:00:29Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33420Comment on Greenlee and the Gun<p>Wow, I was expecting the other girl to pull something, not poor, drunken Susan. And he sure turned from smarmy to complete a-hole in a hurry.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33420?basename=776622008-07-08T16:00:29Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Greenlee and the Gun<p>=O oh my! She has some issues.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33420?basename=687602008-06-07T16:45:31ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrowComment on Greenlee and the Gun<p>Looks like someone went on a writing spree last night. Downright disastrous turn of events here, but a good job giving Greenlee impetus for his turn to the jerk side.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33420?basename=687152008-06-07T11:28:58ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477