Comments on 'Everyone says'Everyone says "Don't do it"
They all say "Stay away."
But I can't.
People are telling me to stay away.
But I couldnt.
Even if I tried.
You have this hold on me,
that I can't explain.
The look in your eyes,
it makes me melt.
And the softness of your kiss,
it takes my breath away.
It doesn't matter what anybody says,
because nothing they say changes,
that I love you.2008-06-08T00:38:19Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33429Comment on Everyone says<p>thank you so much.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33429?basename=688912008-06-08T00:38:19Zlenahttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_6077Comment on Everyone says<p>this was beautiful!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33429?basename=687972008-06-07T18:33:00ZPhosphate11http://ficlets.com/authors/phosphate11