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  <title>Comments on 'Rememberance'</title>
  <subtitle>I don't remember it well.

I was 15.

A technicolour blur of a beautiful summer day, such promise at the start.

I remember waking up, I'd had such a lovely dream. I was jumping out of bed happy. Happy to be alive, happy at the summer day, happy to be seeing the one, true love of my life. 
I mean, I'd known him a few weeks now, how could someone not be sure of our feelings after that amount of time together?

Then I remember the park. The local park is lovely, if you can bring yourself to ignore the mounds of used condoms strewn along the riverbank.

I met him. He'd been so lovely to me. He flashed me _that_ smile. I adored him. There was a smell of burning, and some rotten stumps where proud trees once stood. We walked through the daffodils and laughed about a pair of boots that were sinking in some mud.

He kissed me fiercely. He held me tightly. I felt safe.

Then he didn't let go.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-06-13T23:13:50Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Rememberance</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;uh-oh! I know where this is going&amp;#8230;&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-13T23:13:50Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Mistress Elsha Hawk</name>
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