Comments on 'Who are you?'Emily quickly tosses the "plastic ball of death" into the bathroom sink and closes the door. Both stare at the door waiting for something, anything.
Nothing.
Emily in panic mode.
"Dana I'm so sorry! We need to get you to a different room, maybe a different hospital."
Dana argees, as she does a noise comes from the bathroom. Emily begins to shake, Dana's eyes begin to water. This is it, the waiting is over. What ever was meant to happen is going to happen right now. The noise gets louder, for moment and then it stops.
Emily walks over to the door to investigate. Slowly to the door.Before she gets to the door it opens, just a crack. Her arm extends to to push the door open, before she does it swings open with great force. A man is seen with an evil grin.
He stares at Emily. She can not move or scream.
In a whisper the man speaks.
"Emily! It's time."2008-07-01T20:44:53Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33578Comment on Who are you?<p> OHH …EEM GEE !!<br />this story is so great but crap its frickin scary! .but exciting</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=753742008-07-01T20:44:53Zsuspensetakenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_9854Comment on Who are you?<p>Great setup… but why the whole tense-switcharoo? Stylistic thing, maybe? I don’t know; but great anyway</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=705892008-06-13T20:03:33Zg2 (la pianista irlandesa)http://ficlets.com/authors/spanishpiano701Comment on Who are you?<p> OH CRAP .<br />that is not good.<br />but awesome job. <br />wow…<br />creepy</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=704852008-06-13T08:51:48Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on Who are you?<p> AHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!<br />omg not what I expected at all!!!!<br /> OMG OMG OMG OMG <br /> TIME FOR WHATTT !!!<br /> NO WONDERBALL ! WHYYYY!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=701352008-06-12T02:35:45ZLovingYourHeartbreak♥http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxoComment on Who are you?<p>O_O that was not what I expected! What a great twist! And super scary. I think I may have nightmares</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=698322008-06-11T03:27:42Zpenguincaptain18http://ficlets.com/authors/user_5439Comment on Who are you?<p>woah. I didn’t see that one coming!!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=698042008-06-11T01:20:35ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on Who are you?<p>Ooh, crazy circumstances and not what I think anyone expected. Not sure I’m a fan of switching to present tense, and a few typos, but what the heck, it’s a work in progress, right.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=697562008-06-10T22:58:22ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Who are you?<p> GAH !!!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=696912008-06-10T20:33:04ZJMBauhaushttp://ficlets.com/authors/jeanjeanieComment on Who are you?<p>It’s time. Very ominous line.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=692842008-06-09T12:57:55Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Who are you?<p>Excellent development! I can honestly say I don’t think I would have seen (envisioned?) this coming. Great work.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=692782008-06-09T11:54:27ZEckhousehttp://ficlets.com/authors/eckhouseComment on Who are you?<p> HE BETTER BE HOTT !!! lol</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=692112008-06-09T02:16:23ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_loveComment on Who are you?<p> OMG ! I fell out of my chair screaming. Almost. But, pretty much.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=691612008-06-08T23:34:24ZDr. Moussehttp://ficlets.com/authors/gathkalvrComment on Who are you?<p> OMG that is the scariest thing i have ever heard… nice detail about the evil grin I can just imagine it (<strong>Shudder</strong>) Great job!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=691152008-06-08T20:39:25ZNissakithttp://ficlets.com/authors/nerissaComment on Who are you?<p> AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH </p>
<p> AWESOME !!!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33578?basename=689842008-06-08T11:38:24ZJe T'aime Jonas Brothershttp://ficlets.com/authors/brie_is_an_angel