Comments on 'So Long...'As Emily tried to understand what had just happend, her consciousness began to flicker, a dying lightbulb in an attic.
She felt woozy; she fought to remain conscious. "Who are you?" she mustered.
"You'll learn soon enough," the man droned, raising his arm parallel to the floor, arm extened toward Emily's chest. Emily felt something twist her heart; she fought not to cry out. Her eyes met Dana's.
"_Help... me..._" she gasped. Dana's eyes were filled with a combination of sympathy, inability to help, and a slight "I told you so."
The man's mouth twisted into a dark smile. "It's almost complete," he hissed to himself.
"What's.... complete?" Emily mustered, now on her knees in agony.
"I've been waiting so long..." the man said in diabolical victory, just as Emily blacked out, "_so... long..._"2008-06-15T20:59:17Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33612Comment on So Long...<p>hey!! wow!! I never knew you could write such a good SCARY story!! I love this story you gotta keep writing to this story!! The supense is killing me to know what is going to happen next! I am going to keep reading. =]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=710112008-06-15T20:59:17ZColorguardx0ohttp://ficlets.com/authors/itzemmax0oComment on So Long...<p>Geez, I feel wicked important, what with everyone saying how awesome this thing is! :-D Thanks everyone; glad I could help move this puppy along. (and I never thought I could write creepy, but apparently I did well with it…)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=706592008-06-14T00:32:52Zg2 (la pianista irlandesa)http://ficlets.com/authors/spanishpiano701Comment on So Long...<p>oh wow.<br />just…<br />wow.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=704862008-06-13T08:53:18Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on So Long...<p>Hey, you wanna know what happens next… ya gotta keep reading ;-)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=704132008-06-13T01:10:09Zg2 (la pianista irlandesa)http://ficlets.com/authors/spanishpiano701Comment on So Long...<p> WHATS ALMOST COMPLETE ?!<cite>!?!</cite>!!<br /> WHO IS THIS GUY ? IS HE THE WONDERBALL ???<br /> HOLY FRICKING CRAP !!!!!!<br /> SOOOO INTENSE !!!<br /> SOOOO SCARY !!!!!!!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=701362008-06-12T02:37:21ZLovingYourHeartbreak♥http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxoComment on So Long...<p>what happened to the wonderball…?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=699872008-06-11T17:04:56Zinvisibility_disabilityhttp://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_storiesComment on So Long...<p>Whats complete!??!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=698052008-06-11T01:22:06ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on So Long...<p>Definitely creepy take into an entirely different direction. I like how everyone is continuing the back and forth between the two girls despite one being unable to speak.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=697642008-06-10T23:20:23ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on So Long...<p>Oooh, maybe she’s being transferred into the Wonderball? Or maybe I’m totally delusional – either way, good ficlet.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=693542008-06-09T19:15:01ZStovohobohttp://ficlets.com/authors/stovohoboComment on So Long...<p>Wow, that’s a freaky ending. What’s he been waiting for?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=692832008-06-09T12:57:36Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on So Long...<p>Ok, so any questions I had about Wonderball’s intent have been answered. Thanks, guys. : )</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=692792008-06-09T11:55:07ZEckhousehttp://ficlets.com/authors/eckhouseComment on So Long...<p>Wow. This is awesomely creepy. Good job.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=691402008-06-08T22:44:49ZDreamerhttp://ficlets.com/authors/dreamerComment on So Long...<p>I’m not sure what “the man” wants… I’m leaving that to someone else down the road ;-)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=691282008-06-08T21:15:33Zg2 (la pianista irlandesa)http://ficlets.com/authors/spanishpiano701Comment on So Long...<p>omg, does he want her heart to live of something??? great job!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=691162008-06-08T20:41:24ZNissakithttp://ficlets.com/authors/nerissaComment on So Long...<p>amazing!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=690842008-06-08T19:00:56ZFantasyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/fantasyComment on So Long...<p>:-D Thanks; I’m not usually a thriller person, but apparently I did good… Good job to everyone else who’s been working on this story!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=690732008-06-08T18:38:46Zg2 (la pianista irlandesa)http://ficlets.com/authors/spanishpiano701Comment on So Long...<p><em>creepy music plays</em> <strong>Noooooo!</strong> I knew nothing good could happen.</p>
<p>Good job continuing the ficlet series of the wonderball. Everyone that’s working together on this is doing an amazing job.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33612?basename=690712008-06-08T18:36:25ZHunting Beautyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/missourigirl