Finally, Emily realized what was happening. Or rather what was going to stop happening: her life. The man was trying to take her heart. Her eyes widened at the excruciating pain that ripped through her whole body, making it shake. She had never experienced such pain or fear ever in her life. Dana was now looking at Emily and the man, shock painted onto her face. _She was right,_ thought Emily. _The Wonderball is bad_. She now regretted ever ignoring the warnings Dana had tried to give her. &quot;Please,&quot; Emily gasped in horror. &quot;Don't do this to...&quot; the tearing sensation was almost unbearable now. The man's wicked smile widened and his eyes narrowed. &quot;Finally,&quot; he smirked. &quot;It's finally going to happen.&quot; &quot;No!&quot; Emily shouted, she thought it was her last breath, but then a woman came out from the bathroom. Her face calm and gentle. _The other half of the Wonderball..._ 2008-06-13T08:56:52Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/33637 <p>awesome twist. <br />this is crazy<br />and amazing</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=70488 2008-06-13T08:56:52Z wytherwings http://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwings <p> OMG AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<br /> SOOO CREEPY !<br /> GREAT TWIST !!! LOVE ITT !!!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=70137 2008-06-12T02:38:23Z LovingYourHeartbreak♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxo <p>amazing twist! nice job!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=70014 2008-06-11T19:48:44Z Flute Loop<33 http://ficlets.com/authors/sasha <p>great twist.<br />also, you might want to separate the 3rd paragraph where emily and the man speak. i got a little confused there&#8230;</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69991 2008-06-11T17:10:30Z invisibility_disability http://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_stories <p>Aha, nice job bringing back a theme/idea suggested earlier. Very exciting stuff.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69766 2008-06-10T23:29:41Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477 <p>Cool twist&#8230; gotta love the wonderball</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69554 2008-06-10T04:47:26Z Apostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27 <p>i completely agree with everyone else. the twist of the second personality and how the 2 personalities are complete opposites is amazing.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69333 2008-06-09T18:31:59Z Hunting Beauty http://ficlets.com/authors/missourigirl <p>whoa!!!! this is crazy! its like the whole opposites thing-like god/goddess sort of thing. I love it!!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69327 2008-06-09T18:03:09Z Six Feet Under The Stars http://ficlets.com/authors/user_4266 <p>Very interesting twist with the other half of the wonderball introduced</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69285 2008-06-09T13:00:10Z thebetweenspace http://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspace <p>This is a heck of a twist, which I think is awesome. I&#8217;m grabbing some popcorn and settling in for the rest of this one.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69280 2008-06-09T11:56:30Z Eckhouse http://ficlets.com/authors/eckhouse <p>Nice take off of the series! Very nice job. =)<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69195 2008-06-09T00:51:44Z .:band baby:. http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbaby <p>Yeah, this is what I was kind of thinking too. Fantastic job.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69193 2008-06-09T00:45:53Z Dreamer http://ficlets.com/authors/dreamer <p>This is what ficlets is all about. I was thinking of two people in that darn ball. explains the split personality.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69177 2008-06-09T00:10:12Z Phil Sporlan http://ficlets.com/authors/phil_sporlan <p>Woah, two people as the wonderball? That&#8217;s interesting&#8230;<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69163 2008-06-08T23:37:32Z Dr. Mousse http://ficlets.com/authors/gathkalvr <p>this series is insane. it doesnt even belong to one person anymore&#8230;at this point its everyones.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33637?basename=69151 2008-06-08T23:09:28Z Six Feet Under The Stars http://ficlets.com/authors/user_4266