Comments on 'Figment of the Imagination'Emily opened her eyes. Where was she? A black expanse; no distinction between floor and sky. She stood up; she felt odd. Then she realized: she was inside her own subconcious.
Just then, a fog suspended in midair appeared before her. It was the exact color of the Wonderball. It snickered.
"Did you think you'd outsmart me? I may look like a toy, but truths can be decieving, can't they?" it asked slyly.
"What do you want from me?" Emily hissed.
"Oh, not just from you, dear." The fog reached out to stroke her cheek. She jerked away. "You see, I can't break free for long without a host. You just happened to be right there, so I took advantage," he explained silkily. "I have to use what I got."
In a flash, Emily felt her legs disintigrating. The blue fog began to grow more distinct. "Now, dear Emily, you will be a mere memory."
"She will not!" another voice shouted. Emily saw a similar fog, red this time, behind the blue.
_The split personality..._
_Continue on with sequal of _Not so fast _..._2008-06-13T16:14:56Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33675Comment on Figment of the Imagination<p>I never considered that… it’s entirely possible. It may not work in this series, but I <em>could</em> do another thing similar… have some figments interspersed throughout other people’s stories, probe into the characters’ conscience… That would be pretty sweet, actually. Thanks for the suggestion =)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33675?basename=705452008-06-13T16:14:56Zg2 (la pianista irlandesa)http://ficlets.com/authors/spanishpiano701Comment on Figment of the Imagination<p>wow… is there gonna be like a war between the two sides, <em>all in her head??</em><br />thats freaky<br />awesome job!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33675?basename=704872008-06-13T08:55:19Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on Figment of the Imagination<p>@ i_d: Now that I think about it, it is a lot like the whole Tom Riddle thing from <em>Chamber</em>. I never thought of it like that before.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33675?basename=704172008-06-13T01:28:26Zg2 (la pianista irlandesa)http://ficlets.com/authors/spanishpiano701Comment on Figment of the Imagination<p>intersing…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33675?basename=700122008-06-11T19:45:41ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on Figment of the Imagination<p>this reminds me of The Host / Tom Riddle in Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33675?basename=699902008-06-11T17:06:23Zinvisibility_disabilityhttp://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_storiesComment on Figment of the Imagination<p>Nice job taking it internal, making things more quiet.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33675?basename=697902008-06-11T00:17:40ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477