Comments on 'Wonderball makes new Friends'"Sol-leks."
The voice was calm but ringing with it's athourity. Suddenly the man stoped, not as though he froze but he merely wanted to concentrate on the woman's words.
"Yes Sandra?" His voice was seemingly calm and if Emily had been paying attention, she would have heard the slight longing in it.
Dana was, in fact,paying attention.
"Is she really who you want to settle as? Wouldn't you want some one... in the light of more influence?"
"Hmm... Yes, I suppose you're right..."
"Of course I am. Now, If we want to find the others, we need someone more...influental."
"Of course." his eyes were suddenly sharp with excitement of finding these "others".
"But what do we do with her?" Sol-leks glanced at Emily with resentment, as though she were a rat or a bug.
Sandra sighed with what looked like regret in her eyes.
"I tried to warn her. Dispose of her."
Dana looked on helplessly as Sol-leks stuffed her bestfriend into the small wonderball.
He threw the toy onto Dana's bed and walked out with Sandra.2008-06-13T08:59:21Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33695Comment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>oh wow. <br />how will she get out??</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=704892008-06-13T08:59:21Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p> OMG OMG <br />hhaha seriosly flute, that sud be wierd. omg. intense. creepers. omg.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=701392008-06-12T02:40:52ZLovingYourHeartbreak♥http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxoComment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>Poor Dana! I wonder what it would be like to watch your friend get stuffed into a wonderball…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=700162008-06-11T19:51:36ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>...<br />i would spellcheck and grammar check this one.<br />but interesting development, though sudden.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=699942008-06-11T17:13:22Zinvisibility_disabilityhttp://ficlets.com/authors/invisible_storiesComment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>I like that it’s back and forth, as if Sandra might actually be helpful, and then she’s really, really not. In fact, possibly more evil than Sol-leks.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=697892008-06-11T00:16:13ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>I edited it b/c I didn’t like the repeditive word “voice” in the same sentence… sowwy…=)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=695102008-06-10T01:32:54ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_loveComment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>love the line “His voice was seemingly calm and if Emily had been paying attention, she would have heard the slight longing in his voice.” It reads really well.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=694852008-06-10T00:38:09ZSix Feet Under The Starshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_4266Comment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>love the line “His voice was seemingly calm and if Emily had been paying attention, she would have heard the slight longing in his voice.” It reads really well.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=694842008-06-10T00:38:05ZSix Feet Under The Starshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_4266Comment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>love the line “His voice was seemingly calm and if Emily had been paying attention, she would have heard the slight longing in his voice.” It reads really well.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=694832008-06-10T00:37:27ZSix Feet Under The Starshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_4266Comment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>wow, that was a really good sequel! To bad Emily is inside the wonderball now.. wonder how she’ll get out..<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=694752008-06-10T00:17:48Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>eckhouse is right… this is bold and unexpected… and I LOVE it ! very Dickens-esque, bravo! can’t wait to see what happens next</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=694412008-06-09T22:25:38Zg2 (la pianista irlandesa)http://ficlets.com/authors/spanishpiano701Comment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>It’s quite an abrupt development, but bravo for taking such a bold step. Still leaves open so many possibilities, so… in the words of Ana Cristina, you’ve got sequel.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=692972008-06-09T14:13:17ZEckhousehttp://ficlets.com/authors/eckhouseComment on Wonderball makes new Friends<p>Sol-leks means the angry one<br />Sandra meand helper of mankind</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33695?basename=692252008-06-09T03:47:19ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_love